My daughter was telling me one day about this story she is writing. In the story she describes several fantasy level animals and how they interact with one another. The Phoenix Tree is the place where all the Phoenix gather to live and breed. The phrase stuck with me for several weeks. I wrote it down knowing that it was going to become something else to me. The visual in my head was this actual tree which contained traits belonging to the Phoenix….the living, the healing, the burning and the rising again. I like the imagery in that. I like the metaphor for how we live. I asked Riley if she minded my using her term in another way and she was alright with it. So, here are the lyrics to the song. One day when it’s recorded I’ll post that as well.
The Phoenix Tree
every breath greeted clean
pure and new
as close as we get to divinity
when the branches close in
and wrap around
til it all comes down
in flames
The wounds are old
Like the ancient sea
but the roots are deep
on The Phoenix Tree
rising up
keep rising up
so we can see
every breath labored long
strong and steady
as close as we brush in the heavenly
when the leaves press in
whisper in our ears
til it all comes down
in flames
the wounds are real
like the raging sea
but the roots are deep
on this Phoenix tree
building up
keep building up
so we can see
breathing fast and greeted clean
it’s all new and ready
for whatever life brings
The wounds are old
Like the ancient sea
but the roots are deep
on The Phoenix Tree
every breath greeted clean
pure and new
as close as we get to divinity


highhopes1
January 29, 2008
Mrs that was beautiful!
babychaos
January 29, 2008
Excellent. Juke Box Jury says…
“hit”
Cheers
BC
Jude
January 29, 2008
Wow… that is amazing. The pace of the verse breathes with the lyrics… makes me wonder what the melody is.
thanks
x
Five Pennies
January 29, 2008
Mrs. M. this is beautiful. I cat wait to hear the music.
I am glad that you go from politics, to sibling issues, to beautiful poetry in just a matter of days….although I am sure that many days that may happen in a matter of moments. Or other days when there does not seem to be anything deeper than sibling issues.
Honestly, that is what struck me about the last three posts. Some days I feel like there are all kinds of things just waiting to grow in me and blossom….and then there are days when it is just like “overheard at my house”. Just reading your posts reminds me that I am not alone on the journey.
Thanks.
pppj
January 29, 2008
I am amazed. My daughter (age 8) wrote a poem about a rotting apple. I’ll have to email it to you sometime. She referenced a rotting apple to her classmate who is a bully.
Your poem is gorgeous, and you are so darn creative. Thanks for sharing.